Comp 101 Peer Evaluation--Essay II: Description

Essay Author:

Name of Evaluator:

1. Is there a single thesis statement?
If so, what and where is that sentence?

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2. Could the introduction be improved? How? Does it "grab" your attention? Explain. Include a suggestion as to how to improve the opening.

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3. Are the transitions smooth between paragraphs and ideas? If not, explain.

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4. Does any paragraph need to be elaborated? Explain.

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5. Write the following information directly from the first draft of your descriptive paper.


a) simile

b) metaphor

c) alliteration

d) sights (list 3)

e) sounds (list 3)

f) odors/aromas (list 3)

a)

b)

c)

d)

e)

f)

6. Mark any mechanical errors hindering clarity (grammar/usage/spelling/punctuation). Mark directly on draft 1

7. Overall, what do you think would make the greatest improvement in the paper?