Comp 102 Peer Evaluation--Essay I: Creative Profile
Essay Author: Name of Evaluator:

1. Is there a single thesis statement?
If so, what and where is that sentence?
Does the thesis statement match the rest of the essay?

 

 

 
2. Could the introduction be improved? How?

 

 

 
3. Are the transitions between
a) the introductory comments & the collected facts
b) the collected facts themselves
c) the collected facts & the analysis?
If not, explain.

 

 

 

4. Does any statement (or paragraph) need to be elaborated? I.e. are each of the subpoints supported? Explain.

 

 

 

5. Is the description of the person complete? Has the author used mainly "telling" or "showing" as a method of using description in order to reveal his character? Explain.

  
6. Does the conclusion successfully complete the character profile or are there any unanswered questions? Explain.

 

 

 
7. Mark any mechanical errors hindering clarity (grammar/usage/spelling/punctuation). Put marks directly on the first draft.
8. Overall, what do you think would make the greatest improvement in the paper? Explain.